Reading: Benjamin Franklin, Autobiography (written 1771–1790), the Spectator passage (Project Gutenberg #20203). This is the lesson's printed model passage. Literature: Charlotte M. Yonge, A Book of Golden Deeds (1864), "What is a Golden Deed?", "The Stories of Alcestis and Antigone", "The Devotion of the Decii", "Leo the Slave", "The last Fight in the Coliseum", "Sir Thomas More's Daughter", "Under Ivan the Terrible", "The Voluntary Convict", "Heroes of the Plague" and "The Vendeans" (Project Gutenberg #6489).
Theme of the week: We grow by comparing, correcting and imitating good examples. "Iron sharpeneth iron; so a man sharpeneth the countenance of his friend" (Proverbs 27:17).
Rhythm: 4 words a day, Monday to Friday. Each day: read the entry aloud, copy the context sentence into the writing notebook, and write one sentence of your own. Friday: learn the last 4 words, then take the 20-word quiz.
Sources: ★ = from this week's reading · ✝ = KJV (1769 text) · ✎ = a writing term from this lesson
Monday: Franklin's Workshop
11. necessity★
Part of speech: noun (adjective: necessary; verb: necessitate)
Definition: something that must be done or had; the condition of being unavoidable.
From the reading: "...would have laid me under a constant necessity of searching for variety..." (Franklin, on why writing verse would have built up his stock of words).
- Synonyms:
- need, requirement, compulsion
- Antonyms:
- option, luxury, choice
Root:Latin necessitas, from necesse, "unavoidable" (ne- "not" + cedere "to yield"): a thing that will not give way.
22. emend
Part of speech: verb (noun: emendation)
Definition: to correct the errors in a piece of writing, especially by careful comparison.
Context: Jerome emended the old Latin Gospels by comparing them against the Greek, much as Franklin compared his rebuilt papers with the Spectator and corrected his faults.
- Synonyms:
- correct, revise, rectify
- Antonyms:
- corrupt, garble, spoil
Root:Latin emendare, e- "out" + menda "fault": to take the faults out. Do not confuse with amend, which means to change or improve in general (a law, a life, one's ways).
33. refine✝
Part of speech: verb (noun: refinement)
Definition: to make purer or more exact by removing flaws; to improve by small, careful changes.
Context: Franklin's second and third tries refined his style until his sentences stood near the master's.
KJV: "Behold, I have refined thee, but not with silver; I have chosen thee in the furnace of affliction" (Isaiah 48:10). God refines His people as a smith refines metal, and the writer's draft goes through a smaller furnace.
- Synonyms:
- purify, polish, perfect
- Antonyms:
- coarsen, corrupt, roughen
Root:re- "again" + fine, from Old French fin, "pure, finished": to make fine again and again.
44. exacting
Part of speech: adjective (verb: exact, "to demand")
Definition: demanding great care, skill or effort; hard to satisfy.
Context: Franklin was an exacting judge of his own pages. He did not stop when a draft was done, but held it next to the original until he could see where it fell short.
- Synonyms:
- demanding, rigorous, strict
- Antonyms:
- lax, easygoing, careless
Root:Latin exigere, "to drive out, demand, weigh exactly" (ex- "out" + agere "to drive").
Tuesday: Seeing Again: The Second Draft ✎
55. redundant
Part of speech: adjective (noun: redundancy)
Definition: using more words than needed; repeating what has already been said.
Context: In the lesson's sonnet line "The autumn leaves fall down upon the ground," the words down and upon the ground are redundant, because each one says what the other already said.
- Synonyms:
- repetitive, superfluous, wordy
- Antonyms:
- concise, necessary, economical
Root:Latin redundare, "to overflow," from re- "back, again" + unda "wave": words that spill over the edge.
66. haphazard
Part of speech: adjective (adverb: haphazardly)
Definition: lacking order or plan; arranged by chance.
Context: Franklin jumbled his hints into a haphazard heap on purpose, then trained his sense of arrangement by putting them back in the best order.
- Synonyms:
- random, disorganized, slapdash
- Antonyms:
- orderly, methodical, deliberate
Root:Middle English hap, "chance, luck" (as in happen) + hazard, "a game of dice": as if left to a throw of the dice.
77. felicitous
Part of speech: adjective (noun: felicity)
Definition: (of a word or phrase) well chosen and exactly suited to its purpose; apt and pleasing.
Context: The lesson's revision, "The maples spend their gold along the lane," is felicitous. The single verb spend gives the reader both a picture and a meaning.
- Synonyms:
- apt, fitting, well-chosen
- Antonyms:
- clumsy, awkward, inappropriate
Root:Latin felix, felicis, "fruitful, happy, lucky": the happy word that falls in the right place.
88. shift★ ✎
Part of speech: noun and verb
Definition: (in writing) an unneeded change in tense, voice or mood inside a passage; (generally) a change in position, direction or tone. Test questions often ask where a passage "shifts" its focus or tone.
From the reading: "The tense shifts from past to present and the voice from active to passive."
- Synonyms:
- change, switch, turn
- Antonyms:
- constancy, steadiness, continuity
Root:Old English sciftan, "to arrange, divide."
Wednesday: What Is a Golden Deed?
99. inherent★
Part of speech: adjective
Definition: existing as a natural, permanent part of something; built in.
From the reading: "The true cause of such enjoyment is perhaps an inherent consciousness that there is nothing so noble as forgetfulness of self."
- Synonyms:
- innate, intrinsic, essential
- Antonyms:
- external, acquired, extrinsic
Root:Latin inhaerere, "to stick in" (in- + haerere "to cling"): something that clings from the inside.
1010. heroism★
Part of speech: noun (adjective: heroic)
Definition: great courage and nobility, especially in danger or in giving oneself for others.
From the reading: "...in the trust that example may inspire the spirit of heroism and self-devotion." (Yonge's reason for collecting her stories: good examples are meant to be imitated, like Franklin's Spectator.)
- Synonyms:
- valor, gallantry, bravery
- Antonyms:
- cowardice, timidity, faintheartedness
Root:Greek heros, "hero, warrior, protector."
1111. disinterested★ ✝
Part of speech: adjective
Definition: not influenced by personal gain; unselfish and impartial. (Careful: disinterested does not mean "bored." That is uninterested. Tests check this difference.)
From the reading: "...the soldier's attachment to his master was quite as brave and disinterested as that of the Gallic slave..."
KJV link: "Look not every man on his own things, but every man also on the things of others" (Philippians 2:4).
- Synonyms:
- unselfish, impartial, unbiased
- Antonyms:
- self-seeking, partial, biased
Root:dis- "not" + interest, from Latin interesse, "to be between, to matter": having no stake of one's own in the matter.
1212. obscure★ ✝
Part of speech: adjective; also a verb (to obscure = to hide or make unclear)
Definition: Not well known; unclear or hard to understand.
From the reading: "...one habitual crime at least was wiped from the earth by the self-devotion of one humble, obscure, almost nameless man." (The monk Telemachus, whose death ended the gladiator fights.)
KJV link: "And base things of the world, and things which are despised, hath God chosen" (1 Corinthians 1:28).
- Synonyms:
- unknown, humble, inconspicuous; (second sense) vague, murky
- Antonyms:
- famous, renowned, prominent; (second sense) clear, plain
Root:Latin obscurus, "dark, covered over."
Thursday: Plague, Peril and Command
1313. contagion★ ✝
Part of speech: noun (adjective: contagious)
Definition: the spreading of disease by contact; (also) the spreading of a harmful influence or feeling.
From the reading: "...thus confine the contagion within their own boundaries..." (The rector Mompesson and the people of Eyam shut themselves in so the plague would not spread to their neighbors.)
KJV link: "Nor for the pestilence that walketh in darkness; nor for the destruction that wasteth at noonday" (Psalm 91:6).
- Synonyms:
- infection, transmission, plague
- Antonyms:
- immunity, quarantine, health
Root:Latin contagio, from con- "together" + tangere "to touch."
1414. virulent★
Part of speech: adjective (noun: virulence)
Definition: Extremely severe or harmful, especially of a disease; bitterly hostile or spiteful (tests often use this second sense for speech).
From the reading: "So virulent was the contagion that, ninety-one years after..." the plague at Eyam could still strike men who dug near the graves.
- Synonyms:
- deadly, malignant, toxic; (second sense) venomous, vicious
- Antonyms:
- harmless, mild, benign
Root:Latin virulentus, "full of poison," from virus, "poison, slime."
1515. undaunted★ ✝
Part of speech: adjective
Definition: not discouraged or made afraid by danger or difficulty.
From the reading: "He was active and undaunted..." (Henri de La Rochejaquelein, leading his worn and starving peasants of the Vendée.)
KJV link: "Be strong and of a good courage; be not afraid, neither be thou dismayed: for the LORD thy God is with thee whithersoever thou goest" (Joshua 1:9).
- Synonyms:
- fearless, unflinching, bold
- Antonyms:
- daunted, fearful, disheartened
Root:un- "not" + daunt, from Latin domitare, "to tame": a spirit that will not be tamed.
1616. edict★ ✝
Part of speech: noun
Definition: an official order issued by a person in authority.
From the reading: "...but forgot both the present edict and that his father had scrupulously asked permission before accepting the challenge." (Young Titus Manlius broke the consuls' command against single combat.)
KJV link: "Wherefore king Darius signed the writing and the decree" (Daniel 6:9), the royal edict that Daniel would not obey when it forbade him to pray.
- Synonyms:
- decree, command, proclamation
- Antonyms:
- request, suggestion, petition
Root:Latin edictum, from e- "out" + dicere "to speak": a command spoken out to all.
Friday: Turning, Kneeling, Following (then the quiz)
1717. penitence★ ✝
Part of speech: noun (adjective: penitent)
Definition: sincere sorrow for one's sins, together with the will to turn from them.
From the reading: "Many and many were won back to penitence..." (Vincent de Paul among the galley convicts.)
KJV link: "For godly sorrow worketh repentance to salvation not to be repented of: but the sorrow of the world worketh death" (2 Corinthians 7:10).
- Synonyms:
- repentance, contrition, remorse
- Antonyms:
- impenitence, defiance, hardness of heart
Root:Latin paenitentia, from paenitere, "to regret."
1818. supplication★ ✝
Part of speech: noun (verb: supplicate; noun for the person: suppliant)
Definition: a humble, earnest request, especially a prayer to God.
From the reading: "...in spite of the supplications of Ismene, she was put to death..." (Antigone, who buried her brother.)
KJV: "Be careful for nothing; but in every thing by prayer and supplication with thanksgiving let your requests be made known unto God" (Philippians 4:6).
- Synonyms:
- entreaty, petition, plea
- Antonyms:
- demand, command, refusal
Root:Latin supplicare, "to kneel, beg humbly," from sub- "under" + plicare "to bend": to bend down before another.
1919. capitulate★
Part of speech: verb (noun: capitulation)
Definition: to surrender, especially on agreed terms; to give in to pressure or argument.
From the reading: "They forced their Khan to take refuge in a tower, and made signs as if to capitulate." (The defenders of Kazan, besieged by Ivan the Terrible.)
- Synonyms:
- surrender, yield, submit
- Antonyms:
- resist, hold out, defy
Root:Medieval Latin capitulare, "to draw up under headings," from capitulum, "chapter, heading" (caput, "head"). A surrender was set down head by head, like the heads of an encomium.
2020. exemplify★ ✝
Part of speech: verb (noun: exemplar, example)
Definition: to be a clear, typical example of; to show by example.
From the reading: "Never was the old saying, that a dutiful child had dutiful children, better exemplified than in the More family."
KJV link: "Let no man despise thy youth; but be thou an example of the believers, in word, in conversation, in charity, in spirit, in faith, in purity" (1 Timothy 4:12).
- Synonyms:
- illustrate, embody, typify
- Antonyms:
- contradict, misrepresent
Root:Latin exemplum, "sample, pattern" + -ficare, "to make": to make into a pattern for others.
Friday Quiz (20 points)
Part A. Match the word to its meaning (1 point each).
1. emend 2. contagion 3. disinterested 4. capitulate 5. redundant
a. to surrender on terms · b. not swayed by personal gain · c. to correct the faults in a text · d. using more words than needed · e. the spreading of disease by contact
Part B. Choose the best word for each blank (1 point each). Word bank: necessity, refine, haphazard, felicitous, heroism, obscure, virulent, edict, supplication, exemplify (you may change the word's ending to fit the sentence)
6. "Behold, I have ______ thee, but not with silver" (Isaiah 48:10).
7. "In every thing by prayer and ______ with thanksgiving let your requests be made known unto God" (Philippians 4:6).
8. The consul's ______ forbade any Roman to leave the ranks for single combat.
9. Telemachus was an ______ monk, yet his death ended the games in the Coliseum.
10. The fever was so ______ that half the village fell sick within a week.
11. One ______ verb can do the work of three ordinary adjectives.
12. Margaret More ______ the love of a dutiful daughter.
13. His notes lay in a ______ pile until he sorted them by head.
Part C. Synonym or antonym? Write S or A (1 point each).
14. undaunted / fearful 15. inherent / intrinsic 16. penitence / contrition 17. exacting / careless
Part D. Short answer (3 points).
18–20. In one or two sentences, explain how Franklin's method of revision is like the way Yonge hoped her readers would use A Book of Golden Deeds. Use at least two of this week's words correctly.
Answer key (for the parent or teacher)
1. c 2. e 3. b 4. a 5. d
6. refined 7. supplication 8. edict 9. obscure 10. virulent 11. felicitous 12. exemplified 13. haphazard
14. A 15. S 16. S 17. A
18–20. Sample: "Franklin held his pages next to the Spectator and emended his faults, and Yonge hoped her readers would hold their lives next to the heroism of disinterested men and women and refine their own conduct by the comparison." (1 point for a correct idea linking the two kinds of imitation, plus 1 point for each correctly used week word, up to 2.) Note: the words necessity and heroism in the Part B bank are distractors.